In this college, I am majoring in English, it was called “Department of Applied Foreign Language”. Of course, most classes of them are about English, only two classes are using Chinese.
We have many great teachers, such as Peng Teng-Lung, Huang Hui-Ling, Wei Shyh-Chyi, Christopher J O’Brien, Chen Shu-Chu, and Lee Shu-Jung. They consecrate to teach us, so that we can make advance soon.
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Rossi, hello. You have written a bit more, but only on one date. Remember that I only count one entry per day; this gives you only about 8 points (if the post were perfect) at best.
In this post, you've made some mistakes. Since you're still in the English department, you should use "I am majoring" in the first sentence. The next sentence in that paragraph uses a comma splice.
My middle name should be written as "J." not "j".
"offort" is not an adjective, so I cannot guess your meaning in the next sentence. I'll rewrite the next part: "...so that we can make progress quickly."
If you wanted to have any hope of passing the class, you needed to do a really good job with the third grading period, Nov. 26-Dec. 23. Sadly, that period ends tomorrow, so it's too late. If you want to keep writing till the end of the semester I will give you another chance--if you ask for one!
Chris O'Brien
I have raised your grade for the 2nd period to 7 points.
Chris
You did not ask for another chance, as I suggested, so it's just too late. There was only one entry for the whole third period, yielding a grade of 6. The averaged blog grade is now a 6.5. Your final grade is not yet finished as I'm not done with all the homework but so far it's a 48; it might rise to 60; I really don't feel too sure about it though. Please do your best to keep up next semester.
Chris O'Brien
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